UNDERNATION's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Institute Kaorishe - Page 11]

wicked

you've got really nice design in your panels and your characters. There's some little panel transition and composition problems, but you've got a really consistent style and real talent.

kreeslak responds:

Yay youre right!
After studing aniamtion I've been able to se many problems on the lecture of my comics, i think im going to redo this pages too.

Thanks a lot for the advice!

[Flawn Robot Prince Legacy]

nice

good use of line weights and shapes. He's really smooth.

kreeslak responds:

Thanks ya ^^
i love the weight of fat inking

[Bowser]

garrrh!

best bowser I've seen ever, hands down.

Gonzossm responds:

:3 glad you think so

[The Weather]

fun

I like that they're kind of dumpy, like they should go jogging more often. And does the sun wear sunglasses to shade his eyes from himself?

Blazingturkey responds:

Well the whole dumpy thing was an accident if I'm honest I was just aiming to make them look tired for now but thanks for pointing that out and as for the sun glasses those were a last minute add on and I only kept them because I was gonna do a mafia/hitman mickey take, but yeah thanks for the comment

[Facebook]

!!!!!!

Holy shit! or unholy.....

TheShadling responds:

XD nice pun! Thanks UNDERNATION you rule.

[detection funky mcfly]

nice

really sweet line!

dommi-fresh responds:

thanks buddy!

[Jewel God]

really nice.

I love the color and design of this, though his tail looks kind muddy and his belly could be sharper. Those things, I think, would push this over the hump.

altrian responds:

Thanks! You're right, I'll probably go back and tighten some things up. Appreciate the feedback!

[Yeah...]

ug

Something about this makes me feel dirty.
Really like the lighting on this, and color choices.

ToonHole responds:

thanks man! he's a dirty guy haha

[Coltrane]

great

I really like that color. Very strong representation.

J-qb responds:

Thanks!

[Ching Chongin]

oh yes

I'm crazy about this game and this image. Really great energy, You really captured the game as well.

TheShadling responds:

Thanks Undernation, I appreciate the reviews of a mad artist like you.