UNDERNATION's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flawn Robot Prince Legacy]

nice

good use of line weights and shapes. He's really smooth.

kreeslak responds:

Thanks ya ^^
i love the weight of fat inking

[Bowser]

garrrh!

best bowser I've seen ever, hands down.

Gonzossm responds:

:3 glad you think so

[The Weather]

fun

I like that they're kind of dumpy, like they should go jogging more often. And does the sun wear sunglasses to shade his eyes from himself?

Blazingturkey responds:

Well the whole dumpy thing was an accident if I'm honest I was just aiming to make them look tired for now but thanks for pointing that out and as for the sun glasses those were a last minute add on and I only kept them because I was gonna do a mafia/hitman mickey take, but yeah thanks for the comment

[the dog]

cute

Those whote logos are distracting. The girl is nice looking, but the dog doesn't seem to be in the same style. The bike is well done, they're not easy.

[Facebook]

!!!!!!

Holy shit! or unholy.....

TheShadling responds:

XD nice pun! Thanks UNDERNATION you rule.

[detection funky mcfly]

nice

really sweet line!

dommi-fresh responds:

thanks buddy!

[ogre]

gah!

the background in off-putting, but nice design.

[deity]

had to show another person this, cause it's great!

really great looking, and I'm not usually into fantasy imagery.

[Jewel God]

really nice.

I love the color and design of this, though his tail looks kind muddy and his belly could be sharper. Those things, I think, would push this over the hump.

altrian responds:

Thanks! You're right, I'll probably go back and tighten some things up. Appreciate the feedback!

[Electric outlet]

nothing wrong with derivative...

just as long as your true to yourself/ work.
The dialogue could be shaved down a lot, you don't need much talking for this gag to work. The last four panels are a little confusing in that I'm not sure what I'm supposed to read first.
anyway, keep at it, as you develop I think a lot of folks will pick up on your work.